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由經濟數據得知，從1937年以來實質經濟成長率除了1947年3.64%，其他年度皆低於2%，20年中有11年負成長，甚至在1940年、1944年、1948年、1949年實質經濟成長率為-2%以上。

As indicated by the economic data, rates of economic growth in real term had been lower than 2% since 1937, exceptfor the 3.64% in 1947.  Eleven out of twenty years had seen negative growth.  The rate of growth in 1940, 1944, 1948, and 1949 were all worse than -2%. 

1964年A國的實質經濟成長率-2.83%，但是所得排名後80%的國民所得皆負成長4%以上，所得排名後40%的國民所得甚至負成長8%以上，只有所得排名最高20%的國民所得成長3.12%，不只全民所得減少，全國所得分配不均程度更形惡化。

In 1964, the economic growth in real term was -2.83% for country A.  However, for individuals at lower 80% income brackets, the negative growth was more than 4%; and the lower 40% saw anegative growth amounting to more than 8%; whereas people in the top 20% saw their income growing by 3.12%.  There is notonly a decline in overall income level, but also a worsening income distribution.  
 
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